Tuesday, 1 November 2016

LILY IN THE JUNGLE
FEATURING THE MAGICAL WISHING TREE

On a summer’s day, Lily was making her mother a special birthday breakfast. Lily had light mousey brown long hair with a little red ribbon tied around her ponytail. She wore a red cloak and buckle shoes. With her buckle shoes, she wore high knee socks with little red ribbons at the top of them. She had just made her mother pancakes with maple syrup, muffins with butter and a cup of tea all ready to take in to her mother’s bedroom. Suddenly Lily remembered SHE FORGOT THE FLOWERS FOR THE SIDE OF THE TRAY! Lily grabbed her basket and set out to the jungle to find the perfect flowers for her mother.

Lily had been walking for what felt like at least an hour but still hadn’t found the perfect flower for her mother. She had walked past yellow flowers, purple flowers, red flowers and pink flowers but none of them stood out to Lily at all. Lily felt like giving up. She started to walk back home, when all of a sudden a big bad wolf jumped out in front of Lily. Lily ran for her life all the way to the other side of the jungle. Until she finally lost the big bad wolf. When Lily caught her breath she took a look around her. There were 5 different paths and she was standing right in the middle  of all of them. She looked around her, to her right was a tall tree. The tree was gold and sparkly and all the leaves were even golder and even sparklier. Lily picked a few leaves for her mum and put them in her basket, they were perfect! Lily chose the path to her right, hopefully it was the right path.

Lily had been walking for what seemed like forever, She started to wonder if she took the right path. Lily’s mouth was as dry as the desert. “I wish I could drink some water” whispered Lily. BOOOOOOOM! Suddenly a long river appeared with a sign saying Drinkable Water. Lily was so happy. There was a drink bottle next to the river, Lily scooped the water into the drink bottle and poured the water into her mouth. Lily put the drink bottle in her basket and started walking on the path again, but then Lily stopped she asked herself how did that river and that drink bottle get there and what was that big boom? “I wish I knew” sighed Lily. BOOOOOOOM! “I know what made that river appear and that drink bottle and Now I know what it is, THE LEAVES!

Lily carefully took out the leaves in her basket their were three leaves, she only had one more wish left. Lily closed her eyes “ I wish I could go home” she said in a loud voice. BOOOOOOOM! Lily opened her eyes she was in her kitchen holding her basket in one hand and the three magical wish leaves in the other. Lily’s mouth was dry again, but Lily had to give her mother her birthday breakfast so she set the flowers up nicely on her mother’s breakfast tray and steadily walked into her mother’s room. “SURPRISE” shouted Lily “ Happy birthday Mother.”Lily’s mother was so happy and so was Lily. “Honey grandma is sick can you take her some bread please.” So Lily set off into the Jungle to deliver the bread to her grandma.

2 comments:

  1. That is a really good piece of writing Kristy!

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  2. That is a really good piece of writing Kristy!

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